I love the idea and love how you went about it! The only comment I had, and I had during class critique Thursday, was that the bottom area, the area that would normally have in-depth ingredients (like for peanut butter it would have: peanuts, oil, food starch, etc.) that is usually a mile long, so the only thing I would've done is filled that space up more. These are sins, so I think there's a lot of things that go into them (like ingredients) that can be written down there. Otherwise, I think you did a great job! Really interesting and captivating to see your percentages of this and that.
I love the idea and love how you went about it! The only comment I had, and I had during class critique Thursday, was that the bottom area, the area that would normally have in-depth ingredients (like for peanut butter it would have: peanuts, oil, food starch, etc.) that is usually a mile long, so the only thing I would've done is filled that space up more. These are sins, so I think there's a lot of things that go into them (like ingredients) that can be written down there. Otherwise, I think you did a great job! Really interesting and captivating to see your percentages of this and that.
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