I think that this is much improved from the first submission! I'm glad that you removed the stack of books from the middle and focused just on the type in the book titles. I think a few of the letters are a bit too perfectly centered in the blocks (the CK, ng, and ERS), but otherwise I think that the colors are balanced well and the green square seems like it belongs in the center. The only other suggestion I could give would be to slightly adjust the plane that the letters are on- they read left to right on almost the same "line."
I think that this is much improved from the first submission! I'm glad that you removed the stack of books from the middle and focused just on the type in the book titles. I think a few of the letters are a bit too perfectly centered in the blocks (the CK, ng, and ERS), but otherwise I think that the colors are balanced well and the green square seems like it belongs in the center. The only other suggestion I could give would be to slightly adjust the plane that the letters are on- they read left to right on almost the same "line."
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