kyle s//sins draft

Ok everyone, here are the first three drafts I've come up with. In case you can't find the third narrative element....that's because it isn't there because I am still researching. But, once I'm done, it will be shown as:  the number line from one to seven with one of the numbers circled, to correspond with the specific sin. Like a chart. Also white.

(The sins shown are gluttony, pride, and sloth)

I would love to hear feedback on how they could be improved <3